Hi kensington, I really liked how you have been commenting on others work but I thought that if your description was more detailed it would make your blog post more exciting to read and also I thought you could add a WALT so that others know what you are learning to do on your blog, also I thought if you made your screen shot of comment more clearer then it would give others some more feedback for you to have if they wanted to read your comment and see if you need sso feedback or feedforward, anyways I think you did a great job and keep up the good work :)
Hi kensington,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you have been commenting on others work but I thought that if your description was more detailed it would make your blog post more exciting to read and also I thought you could add a WALT so that others know what you are learning to do on your blog, also I thought if you made your screen shot of comment more clearer then it would give others some more feedback for you to have if they wanted to read your comment and see if you need sso feedback or feedforward, anyways I think you did a great job and keep up the good work :)