Explanation Writing Paragraph 2

IALT: Try Explain How The See Structure Works

Hello everyone I Have been working on my writing and I have been writing my first paragraph. In this first paragraph I needed to write my statement - Inform the reader what the topic of the paragraph is about, Write my explanation - Explain more about the topic, My Example - Back up the explanation with evidence it's true, Effect - When this happens how does it effect other things. 

S - Statement

E - Explanation

E - Example 

E - Effect

SEE Structure.

Tsunami are mostly caused by Earthquakes that move the oceans floor. This refers to the Earth made up of these large pieces called tectonic plates. Usually grinding or moving together, or sometimes they would get stuck. When this happens the pressure builds and suddenly the plates get moved into a new position. For example let's say that the Earth is staying still and then suddenly two tectonic plates suddenly shift together, this creates energy waves underwater which reach up to the surface which reach up to the surface this makes the water rise above it’s normal sea level which creates a huge wave which is known to be called a Tsunami. Another example of this is if the water along the shoreline moved back dramatically, it most likely means that a tsunami will occur in just a few seconds or minutes. A Tsunami is not just one wave but it’s a series of waves or a wave train. This means that Tsunamis are most likely created by Earthquakes.

Figurative language

Writing figurative

Hello everyone I have been working on writing. We have been
given a sheet of paper with examples of alliteration and
hyperbole. We have been all working on figurative language.
I really enjoyed this because it was really cool.

SC: understand meaning

-write a definition that makes sense to me.

Success criteria

writing

Hello everyone today I have done a writing sample with my class and we had to write about good friends and friendship. What I found challenging about this was trying to write 5 sentences in each paragraph, and I had to write 3 paragraphs or more. What I also enjoyed about this test was writing about friends because I have lots of friends. 

I think what I should do better about this was focusing more on my test and no talking with my friends too much because I always talk too much to them and thats why my teacher miss komor to another table. 

Writing

MY WRITING!!

Hello everyone this is my writing plan and I have been working so hard with this plan and what I found real challenging was trying to come up with a new idea for each paragraph and how I am going to end my text for my conclusion. I also enjoyed writing this story because it reminds me of me and my friends playing outside.

I don't think that you need a link to this work because I already put all of my work on there but I will still put the link on so you can see how I edit my work and how I am doing.

LINK TO MY WORK!!!

EXPLANATION TEMPLATE

Remember the S.E.E.E structure

S	Statement - Use a starter sentence to state a cause - To be a good scientist you need to be . . .
E	Explain - Define the cause - this means . . .
E	Example - connect to the reader - for example...
E	Effect - explain the effect of the cause - if you do that then . . .

Title This will start with HOW... or WHY...	A place of whanaungatanga PLAYGROUND
Introduction What are you going to explain?  How will you hook the reader in?	The playground is a magnificent place where people have fun and it is a very wonderful way of exploring the incredible outdoors. So I think this place is a Amazing place to build great relationships.
Paragraph One What is your first statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)	So in the park you can’t just automatically build great relationships with someone you have to make a  discussion with them and you guys can play a game and you guys will be able to build a relationship.
Paragraph Two What is your second statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)	The park is a really good place to build relationships because It’s a place with lots of different kind of people that have different kind of things that they like, you can make friends with those people, a park is a really good place to make friends.
Paragraph Three What is your third statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)	You can also build relationships with the people around you by saying hi or ask them if they want to play a game with you, and while you guys are playing your relationship can develop.
Conclusion The conclusion sums up all the ideas and repeats a key message to end.  This could be a recommendation or a personal connection.	So that wraps it up for today, I think that the playground is a great place for whanaungatanga and you can build lots of amazing relationships. It’s also a good place to show some of our school values such as manaakitanga, tukumarie and rangimarie.

Writing time!!

WRITING TIME!!!

Hello everyone today in the morning, firstly I am doing writing and for writing I am doing something called an explanation text which requires yourself to explain why something happens or how something happens anyways I think I am going to have a lot of fun with this because for writing we have to write about a place of whanaungatanga

And I have chosen the playground. I hope you enjoy my text when I blog it.

NO KIWISPORT

HAVING NO KIWISPORT

So we had no kiwisport this monday because we had the motat trip. Here are some photos.

Tree planting

TREE PLANTING

Tree planting is the process of transplanting tree seedlings for forestry and landscapes. It is really good to have trees because it can help us breath more better. The trees absorb the dirty air and they filter the particles with their leaves and bark. In many areas trees are mostly selective for harvesting wood.

Once you learn the science of working together you can grow your own in no time. Digging a big hole is the key thing for the growth of trees. Placing the tree. First you have to prepare a hole two to three times wide as the root ball of your tree. Secondly you backfill the hole and water the tree.

For example trees can help us a lot.

It can help us breathe better and it cleans the oxygen and filters it into the right kind of air we are suppose to breath in, It can also help us build houses by harvesting wood and also other helpful things. Trees also protects us from   horrible rays from the sun. It is really dangerous those sun rays, it can really cause skin cancer.